Is this good political writing?

I received this email yesterday from "Joe Biden." Is this good political writing? What do you make of the tone?

Dean --

Look, you've really got to get involved here.

We've got the last Dinner with Barack of this campaign coming up, and before this tradition is over I think you should give it a shot.

Chip in $5 or whatever you can and you'll automatically be entered for a chance to fly out with a guest for dinner with the President. Your airfare and hotel are on us:

https://donate.barackobama.com/Dinner

Thanks,

Joe

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